Christmas Break
When I came to Ukraine, I was so happy to see my family. Because I took three planes and first was 1 hour and 30 minutes, then 9 hours, and the lest one was 3 hours.
Some times I was playing video games, some times I was with my family. I celebrate this Christmas with my friend so I came to his house. And we fire fireworks with his dad first time that was in the forest then in the city, and city name is Cherkassy. Then he celebrated Christmas. Then we sleep and went to the trampolines center, I think that was amazing time there. Then in next day I came to Kiev, I was some time there then go to bed, and I get up at 3 o'clock in the morning and came to America at 11 o'clock in night and I still miss my family!!!!
Some times I was playing video games, some times I was with my family. I celebrate this Christmas with my friend so I came to his house. And we fire fireworks with his dad first time that was in the forest then in the city, and city name is Cherkassy. Then he celebrated Christmas. Then we sleep and went to the trampolines center, I think that was amazing time there. Then in next day I came to Kiev, I was some time there then go to bed, and I get up at 3 o'clock in the morning and came to America at 11 o'clock in night and I still miss my family!!!!
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ReplyDeleteWhat did you do during the break?
ReplyDeleteThere are some spelling mistakes.
Seems like you had a really interesting holiday! But can you really fire fireworks in the forest?😂
ReplyDeleteYour writing is really improving. Let's work together in class to fix these mistakes. 14/20
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